Screenplay feedback, written to you — not about you
Screenplay feedback is a different document from coverage, and conflating them is why so much script analysis feels cold. Coverage is what a buyer's reader writes about you. Feedback is what a mentor writes to you: what already works, what to fix first, and the order to do it in.
The sample this page describes ran six pages on a real feature and opened with the writer's primary strength before it raised a single problem.
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Nothing changes until you Merge
Every edit opens an A/B compare — nothing changes your scene until you Merge.
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What “A/B compare” means in practice
- Character Voice
- “Rewrites only this character's dialogue — action and other characters stay untouched.”
- Alternate Takes
- “Two contrasting rewrites of this scene, compared side-by-side — pick one, or blend the best of both.”
Both quoted from the editor itself. Every suggestion lands next to your original with a Merge button; declining it leaves the scene exactly as you wrote it.
What it catches
- Your primary strength, named first, with an overall assessment and the single biggest opportunity in the draft.
- A named Encouragement section — what already works, and the next step to take. Nothing else in this market has one.
- A revision roadmap split into major revisions, medium revisions and quick wins, with a recommended order to work through them.
- Dialogue feedback quoting actual lines from your script with their scene numbers, on both the improvements and the strengths.
- Structure feedback keyed to percentage positions through the script — the 10% mark, the 25% mark, the 40–75% stretch, 90% and 95%.
- A strengths table pairing each strength with an analysis tied to specific scenes.
From a real report
From a real Script Feedback report on a 121-page feature. Section structure exactly as returned; the writer's scene text is not reproduced.
- Summary
- Primary Strength · Overall Assessment · Biggest Opportunity
- Encouragement
- Next Step · What Already Works
- Revision Roadmap
- Major Revisions · Quick Wins · Medium Revisions · Recommended Order
- Dialogue Feedback
- Overall · Improvements · Strengths — each quoting real lines with scene numbers
- Structure Feedback
- Opening / Middle / Ending / Pacing, assessed at 10%, 25%, 40–75%, 90% and 95%
- Strengths
- A table of Title and Analysis, each tied to specific scenes
Why the register matters
A writer who has just finished a draft and a producer deciding whether to option it need opposite documents. The producer needs a verdict. The writer needs to know which of the twenty things that are wrong to fix on Monday morning. Handing a writer a PASS with a list of weaknesses is accurate and useless.
So the feedback report leads with what works, states one biggest opportunity rather than twenty, and sequences the rest. The quick wins exist so there is something to do in an hour, not only a three-week structural rebuild — and a writer who finishes an hour of work on their own draft is far more likely to come back to the three-week one.
Structure notes, and where the structure page went
Structural analysis lives here rather than on a page of its own, because a structure note that does not come with a revision order is trivia. The report assesses opening, middle, ending and pacing against positions in the script, so 'the midpoint lands late' arrives as a position you can find rather than a category you score badly in.
Exports
Reports export to PDF, Word and Excel. Revised pages export to FDX and Fountain, so the script goes back into whatever you write in.
What screenplay feedback does not do
- It is not coverage. There is no PASS / CONSIDER / RECOMMEND verdict here and no marketability section — those are on the coverage page, deliberately.
- It does not know your career, your deadline, or which of your producers hates voiceover. A mentor who knows you is still better, and this is not pretending to be one.
- It does not rewrite anything. It tells you what to do; the editor is where you do it.
- The encouragement is not flattery generated to soften a blow — it is tied to specific scenes, and if a scene does not work it does not appear there.
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Frequently asked questions
How is this different from script coverage?
Coverage is written about your script for a buyer, with a verdict and a marketability read. Feedback is written to you as the writer, leading with what works and sequencing what to fix. Different documents for different moments — most writers eventually want both.
Does it quote my actual dialogue?
Yes. The dialogue section quotes real lines from your script with their scene numbers, on both the improvements and the strengths, so a note is never abstract.
What are quick wins?
Changes worth making that do not require restructuring anything — the part of the roadmap you can act on in an hour rather than over three weeks. They are listed separately from major and medium revisions.
Will my script be used to train AI?
No. Zero Data Retention is enabled on every model used; your material is never used to train, fine-tune or improve any foundation model. See section 3.1 of the privacy policy.
Can I get feedback in my own language?
Yes — the report is generated in the language the script is written in, across 17 supported languages.
What does it cost?
450 credits at Standard, 300 at Fast, 800 at Premium. Signup includes 2,500 credits with no card required, and a failed generation refunds automatically.
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